When Your SCREENPLAY Isn't Working its Time to get Professional Help! in San Jose, California For Sale

The first ten pages of your screenplay must hook a reader at a production company, agency, or screenwriting competition. If you don't reel them in fast then they're probably going to start skimming or worse--stop reading your script all together.
My analysis can help you see story, plot, character, dialogue, description, structure, conflict, goals, motivation, tone, inner/external conflict, etc. in a new light. I can show you how to avoid common mistakes so the reader can't wait to turn the pages of your script. I've worked on writing or rewriting over 30 screenplays, analyzed over 3,000 scripts as a script analyst, and sold five screenplays.
SCREENPLAY ANALYSIS RESULTS: In one analysis the writer won $10,000 in the L.A. Comedy Scripts Screenplay Competition. Another analysis helped the writer acquired one million dollars in funding toward making their film. I also helped a comedy writer whose films have grossed 100s of millions of dollars with his hard-boiled thriller.
I charge $250.00 for a script analysis. I take PayPal (pay half up front and the other half after you receive your analysis). On average it takes 1-2 full days to complete an analysis. I also write and rewrite feature-length screenplays for clients.
SAMPLES OF MY DETAILED SCRIPT COVERAGE:
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I work from your PDF, Word, or Final Draft files.
Contact me today. My analysis will give you the tools to effectively rewrite your screenplay.
Dan