Whip your SCREENPLAY into shape with my SCRIPT ANALYSIS. in San Jose, California For Sale

My service is for the writer before they send their screenplay out to agents, production companies, or screenwriting contests.
My screenplay analysis looks at what works and what needs improvement through story, plot, character, dialogue, description, structure, conflict, goals, motivation, tone, inner/external conflict, etc. I even rewrite a bit of description and dialogue here and there to give an example on how it can be improved. I've analyzed over 3,000 scripts and written and rewritten over 30 screenplays and have sold five.
MY SCREENPLAY ANALYSIS RESULTS: One writer won $10,000 in the L.A. Comedy Screenplay Competition while another acquired one million dollars in funding and I helped out a writer whose films have grossed 100s of millions at the box office.
I charge $250.00 for an extremely comprehensive script analysis. I take PayPal (pay half up front and the other half after you receive your analysis). On average it takes 1-2 full days to complete an analysis. I also write and rewrite feature-length screenplays for clients.
SAMPLES OF MY DETAILED SCRIPT COVERAGE:
https://www.box.com/s/251cee62d87f4ef81de8
https://www.box.com/s/c9ebd78e38bafxxxxfde
I work from your PDF, Word, or Final Draft files.
Contact me today. Let my analysis help you to effectively rewrite your screenplay.
Dan